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The Tenth Shadow
Topic Started: June 25, 2014, 12:29 pm (1,307 Views)
PackerMan71
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Some of you might know this already, but I have a story over on Fanfiction.net that I'm creating called The Tenth Shadow.

Basically, it's a conglomeration of the Corpse Party game, anime, and manga, with some of my flavor injected into it.

It's the first fanfiction I've written in years, because I had actually fallen out of writing fanfics after I lost my desire for it. And then, I watched the Tortured Souls anime, and it pissed me off so much, it actually inspired me to come up with this fanfic.

Here's the story for anyone who's interested. ;)
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Shigitou burikaa
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give me a reason to care once more. new mod for the grt. -in sachiko I trust-

Ah, I'm gonna read it later, but I read some of it and it was really good.
Good job on it
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I'm married to nana!
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Ist Kisaragi
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I agree with Pokewars, I've read up to the 19 chapter, it seems just really REALLY good!

The combination of all three sides of Kisaragi group's first encounter, the manga, the game and the anime, is really well managed, not to mention well balanced.

On a side note, your character DOES seem a bit overpowered, but I will admit, the actions scenes with his skill and abilities are amazing, so I'm not complaining.
Whether by Windblast or by choke hold, whether by the steel of my Folding Blade or the swiftness of Blink, whether by Possession or by the power of thine Pistol, none shall evade either my Wrath, or my Mercy. For the Outsider gazes from his Void, the fate of all, are in the hands of those, marked by him.
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Cain Marder
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Okay, finally I have what to read during my camping with the Stug in War Thunder, sometimes it can get really boring to camp in this game so I got a occupation now, BTW I read first ch. because I didn't have much time but I already love it. XD
Also I am sleepless during the summer (I've have an irritating record of 2 weeks without sleep during the summer, so now I can read some during the night) no joke I have some kind of insomnia during July or if is getting hotter than usual even in August.

EDIT: maybe you don't know or believe but here in Romania, during the July the medium temperature is 38 grades Celcius, that means that here is pretty hot even that we are a country with temperate climate is getting hotter every year.
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PackerMan71
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June 25, 2014, 2:12 pm
On a side note, your character DOES seem a bit overpowered, but I will admit, the actions scenes with his skill and abilities are amazing, so I'm not complaining.
I realize that my OC is a bit over-powered, but let's be honest here, we could say that about every superhero in history. What sets those characters apart and what makes them interesting are their flaws, because an absolutely perfect hero is freaking boring, IMO.

So while my character does have some crazy skills, he does have his weaknesses, and I've tried to bring them to light as much as possible in the story.
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Shadow Hakai
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I'll read it later and edit my post with my opinions.
Welcome to the Corpse Party.

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PackerMan71
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Just posted Chapter 21 for anyone who's interested. ;)
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Sumisu Able
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(That story was YOURS? F***in' nice.)
"We all have our demons. Mine are real."
"I'm crazy. You're PROBABLY crazy. Let's hang out."
"Oh no, I killed a cop! Again!"
If my character had in-game perks: ENRAGED: This causes Able to become enraged and increase attack damage. EASILY PROVOKED: Whenever Namai says something or something happens mid-battle, it causes Able to lead to ENRAGED much quicker. PSYCHOSIS (I, II and III) : This is a permanent effect. Each event that causes disturbance to Able increase his PSYCHOSIS rating, allowing his perks to be more effective.
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PackerMan71
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Posted Chapter 22.
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7thPhantom
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this story is cool i have to say. it is giving me so many inspirations. keep it up please.
Time~ Space~ possibilities~ Timelines~ Parallel~ Truths~ Singularity~ Pluralism~.

The Thought that transcends all the worlds will surely save this one~~


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